Prewrite-Practice Description

Free Writing

As I walk into the doorway the smell of the door creeps onto me and I know that I am close to walking in. I smell the wreath that hangs on the door; the aroma clearly lets the sniffer know that it is artificial. Upon walking in and receiving a hug the smell of girl becomes clear. Not perfume but rather a natural smell of a simple girl. Then the breath of the hugger is clear, there has been food and it can be smelt with each breath they take. Some sort of candy or treat, definitely not homemade. Then the smell of the clean house mixes with the different body scents and a beautiful musk of smells fills the air.

The knock on the door is loud and clear, it echoes because of the expensive hollow door. The sound of footsteps come pounding up the stairs and a slight murmur is heard as one person speaks to another. A greeting is exchanged and the sweet voice of the girl inside warms the others ears. The moms greeting is also heard and the sound of the clock ticking is ever so audible.

The door of the house is beautifully made and the steps up to the archway are very short. The decorative glass blurs the people inside. There are two of them and one is coming towards the door fast as the other smiles and watches. A girl answers the door, she has long blonde hair and the dull lighting of the house is small in comparison to the smile on her face. There are two giant couches, not leather, but some other material whose name is unknown to the beholder. Everything is beautifully set up and nothing is out of place. It seems perfect when looked at.

As the knuckles tap against the door it is definitely hard, but also very smooth at the same time. The ground is solid beneath him and the inside of his jean pockets are rough against his hand due to their small size. The girl answers his knock with a hug. She is warm and her clothes are soft to the touch. Her hair is rubbing up against his face but has clearly been washed thoroughly because of the silky texture. Her hands have been recently rubbed with lotion as she guides him through the house. His shoes uncomfortably rub against his ankles as he struggles to take them off.

Story

A young man walks up to the door and knocks his knuckles against the hollow wood door. His hands are placed in his super small pockets as he awaits the girl to come answer the door. He can barely catch a glimpse of her through the decorative glass as she answers the door. She smiles a brilliant smile and tells him how glad she is to see him. They hug and he can feel her warmth along with the soft fabric of her shirt. Her long blonde hair is silky smooth and shines no matter what. The mom also extends a greeting as he plops down to rip off his shoe against his ankle. It is an uncomfortable feeling but the beautifully arranged house draws his attention more. The house smells of different people with a mixture of the order and cleanliness it presents. Everything is in order and the girl proceeds to lead him on as she grabs his hand. He is happy to be at his best friend’s house.